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Post by lae_di on Aug 9, 2008 3:54:43 GMT 7
Kakapalan ko na ung muka ko! Ahaha!! here's the very first poem i wrote for Chun out of the spur of the moment!! hope you like it!!! SILENTLY LOVE YOU You think I’m like the others Pretending to be someone they’re not But if you just took the time You’ll see I’m very different. Seeing you smiling is enough. Knowing that you’re fine is O.K. I wouldn’t ask for anything more I could be this way forever Wishing upon a star That someday you’ll see me too Aware that it is impossible So I silently love you Crossing the ocean To get a glimpse of you Is nothing compared to knowing you It’s just too hard to get close to you So I would probably be behind From all those others in love Who am I to say they aren’t worthy I maybe just like them But hoping you can see The person writing this poem Praying this would make you smile As I silently love you hayz!! actually i wanna turn it into a song and if ever translate it in mandarin then i'll send it to HIM cause if ever, i want s.h.e to sing it. ahaha!! thanks for reading!! share your too!!
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Post by timay23 [jill] on Aug 9, 2008 11:44:30 GMT 7
ate lae.. ang ganda ng poem nakakatouch..
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Post by gohfuren on Aug 9, 2008 13:27:23 GMT 7
wow, supeer nakarelate ako sa poem....kc to be honest...simula ng nabaliw ako kay chun...wla na akong crux na ordinary na tao!!
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Post by lae_di on Aug 9, 2008 14:57:10 GMT 7
thanks gurls!! baliw din talaga ako kay chun and i need an outlet kaya ayan ang result! hehehe!!
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Post by mahrenheit99 on Aug 10, 2008 10:21:58 GMT 7
waaaaaaa ang gnda ng poem mo ate lae... grabe gling gling.. clapclapclap.. weeeeeee nice idea ate... bka nga nmn magustuhan ng HIm at ipakanta sa she.. go go go supportahan kita.. hahha
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Post by lae_di on Aug 10, 2008 14:17:47 GMT 7
wahaha!! thanks mahreen!! share ka din ng poem kahit maka-calvin ka!! wahaha!!
naisip ko kasi pang babaeng pangbabae ung poem! wahaha!! ;D
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Post by *~mrs~moya05~chen~* on Aug 10, 2008 14:42:44 GMT 7
ganda ng poem mo.. haha! correct ka jan u can make it into mandarin malay mo kantahin nila db? =)
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Post by timay23 [jill] on Aug 10, 2008 15:31:14 GMT 7
ate lae,
gusto ko talaga siyang basahin araw-araw.. hahayy.. makagawa na sana ako ng sarili kong poem for Chun.
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Post by lae_di on Aug 10, 2008 22:58:52 GMT 7
thank you moya and timay. ay moya diba marunong ka magmandarin!! wahaha!! pwede ba magpatranslate? nyahaha!! adik!!
gawa din kayo, wag kayo madiscourage. ilabas nyo lang ung nararamdaman nyo. hehe!! yan naman kasi talaga ung nararamdaman ko nung mga time na un! ahaha!!
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Post by mahrenheit99 on Aug 11, 2008 16:54:47 GMT 7
@ate lae:...hahaha...chun din kaya ako..hahaha...lol gwa din nga ako..hahahaha...
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Post by Feelingerang Fuuko [Keisi] on Aug 11, 2008 17:08:07 GMT 7
eto sa kin:
A piece of heaven on earth
There was a time in my life when I seemed to give up... I was drifting on earth, like a feather that's being blown by the wind, Like a song of a maiden's broken heart Nobody was there to hear my cry of anguish and pain... I used to believe that fairy tales are nothing but a mad man's dream Used to tell myself waiting for a happy ending is like waiting for pigs to fly I was in a hurry to chase my life and get on the next stage Never thought at the end of the road, I would finally find the answers...
Then you came and smiled And since then, you never left my mind You took my fears aside And taught me how to fly Finally, I was free from the the pain I could almost see the sun shining my way
Meeting you was like meeting an archangel Having you is like never waking from a deep slumber Knowing you is like keeping a big secret in a small box I've always wondered if I could keep you forever Fervently, I pray that I would always stay here with you
I wanted to laugh and cry at the same time I was ready to take the risk, and yet scared that everything would fall into pieces I treasure this moment, because nobody knows when this is going to end But on thing's for sure, I found a piece of heaven here on earth And I found it because of you...
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Post by mahrenheit99 on Aug 11, 2008 17:09:33 GMT 7
@keisi..wow..galing ng poem moh...hahaha favorite line ko dun..
Then you came and smiled And since then, you never left my mind
haha.. i love it..weeeee
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Post by mahrenheit99 on Aug 11, 2008 17:16:19 GMT 7
eto rin eto rin... ginawa ng bestfriend ko..inedit koh..ahahaha pano kung.. bestfriend kau ni chun tapos as in super bestfriend kau... tapos...may feelngs ka sa knya.. kanya lng tinatago tago moh.. at xa ay may feelings din pra sau,.. tapos dumating ung araw nah.. may mahal na xa..... haiizz... di mo mn lng nasabi ang feelings mo pra sa knya.. haiizzz
If you only know my feelings for you.. how much i care and needed you,, im willing to submit myself to you.. just to prove that my love is true,,
chun..please tell me wat to do.. how could I express my love for you.. but its too difficult to do now that you have someone new,,
perhaps someone owns your heart dat makes me falling apart.. how could i conquer your elusive heart i dont know where to start,,
should i shut up and forget you..? should i ignore wat i felt for you?.. but i know the consequences that will keep hurting my conscience...
what else i can do? i guess she is worthy for you... i'll just stay here beside you.. and silently say "WO AI NI"..
hahaha...lol
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Post by Feelingerang Fuuko [Keisi] on Aug 11, 2008 17:27:33 GMT 7
meron pa... di sya poem... pero pede na rin.. hehhe
The snow effect on the screen came into halt as the channels changed. His image came into the screen, as he smiled. The camera drew closer to his boyish face, and in an instance, the world seemed to stop to watch his every move. She went in front of the TV screen. She never took her eyes off her, or even blinked. Just like every girl who have seen him in the small screen, she love him. Not the kind of love of a fan to their idol, but a kind of love that's real... It's a love that made her whole and at the same time tearing her apart. She reached out for his face on the screen, and touched his pixelated cheek. If only she could hold him for real... If only she could stay beside him for just a moment, and make him feel how much she loved him... but everything is just a wishful thinking. She knows she will never have that chance. She is just an ordinary girl who can look up in the sky to adore a shining star like him, and she know she have to stop this madness before it could break her. She closed her eyes and tried to erase his face in her memory, but even with her eyes closed, his image seemed to haunt her. A silent tear fell on her cheek as she turned the TV off. She have decided to let go of this shining star, for loving him made her feel the most painful thing in the world. As she shut the TV off, she will be shutting him in her life forever...
sounds familiar ba? nasa fan fic yan pero originally yan lang yan
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Post by mahrenheit99 on Aug 11, 2008 17:37:25 GMT 7
weeee... haha..nabasa ko rin poh ito sa fanfic.. weeeee galing mo ate keisi.. ahahahaha go! go! go!
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Post by lunaris on Aug 11, 2008 17:53:02 GMT 7
@keisi ung tula is too sweet.. nilalanggam ako!! whahahahahhaha i like fanfics better.. pero great work sa mga nag post ng poems nila.. keep them coming!!
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Post by timay23 [jill] on Aug 11, 2008 18:33:31 GMT 7
@ keisi
- i really like the poem!!! Chun will really be happy when he can read that poem..
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Post by Feelingerang Fuuko [Keisi] on Aug 11, 2008 19:42:01 GMT 7
@ keisi - i really like the poem!!! Chun will really be happy when he can read that poem.. haaayy how i wish he could read it... mapunta sana sya dito sa forum natin
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Post by timay23 [jill] on Aug 11, 2008 19:47:33 GMT 7
@ sis keisi
-don't worry, mapapadaan din ang Fahrenheit dito sa page natin..haha
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Post by lae_di on Aug 11, 2008 19:49:17 GMT 7
ganda keis!! ahaha!! clap clap!! adik!! we can send this on chun's bday din!! this is artwork! he'll love it!! ahaha!!
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Post by Feelingerang Fuuko [Keisi] on Aug 11, 2008 19:54:53 GMT 7
oo nga nu... *wink* sige sige gawin din natin yung gawa ng gagawin natin for calvin
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Post by karenchi on Aug 16, 2008 11:51:18 GMT 7
a poem i made...cguro 5months ago...it's what i want to say to chun...if evr! 1 day! haha! hope u guyz will love it!
"i will be...YOURS...forever"
i'll be your shadow wherever you go/i'll be just beside you whenever you fear/i'll be the truth among the things you know/never will i leave you,i'll always be here.
i'll be your most wonderful paradise/i'll be your nicest place below heaven/i will make you smile several times/all your pain and sorrow i will lessen.
i'll wipe the tears that will fall from your eyes/the one who'll make your darkness dissappear/do my best to stop your million cries/i'll be with your presence through out the years.
i'll hold you,make you feel my sweetest touch/a sound of encouragement to your ears/i'll be the moving clouds for you to watch/i will be your angel who's always near.
i'll be the miracles you want to believe/i'll be the sweetest song playing in your heart/be the goals you've always wanted to achieve/to you i'll be the most beautiful art.
i'll be the path you'll take to your adventures/the only star shining in the night/i will give each of your heartaches a cure/i'll guide your journey with glittering lights.
i'll listen to your softest whispers/i'll mke you remember all the good memories/before you sleep i'll be your storyteller/i'll be the funny moments you'll always miss.
i'll be the happy feeling inside you/i'll hug you tight and will love you forever/i'll prevent you from feeling so so blue/leaving you will always be a never.
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Post by Feelingerang Mo Mo [chunina] on Sept 9, 2008 12:53:35 GMT 7
Whoaaa! Ang cute and for sure, maraming nakakarelate. Haha. Kasi ako, hindi secretly eh. Proudly pa! If only he knows...
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